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Simple Sentence Syndrome
SIMPLE SENTENCE SYNDROME (SSS) -- Writing characterized by strings of simple sentences.

Simple Sentence Syndrome raises a slightly different issue than the other TFR items. The extra work that SSS causes for readers is not so much about understanding a given sentence, but it has to do with readers having to make logical connections between ideas rather than reading sentences in which the ideas have already been combined.

Additionally---and on a much less abstract level---documents with Simple Sentence Syndrome sound like they've been written by and/or for six year olds. Unless you are preparing a document for elementary school children, you will serve yourself well to combine strings of simple sentences into more developed ones.

As suggested on the SSS Example page, simple sentences are a legitimate product of the drafting process---do whatever you need to do to get the ideas out of your head. However, once you're done drafting, keep an eye out for places where your writing suffers from SSS.