Welcome to the Targets for Revising (TFR) site for Mark Arnold's writing classes.
As the name implies, these pages present types of sentences that you
should target and revise while preparing documents for this course.
An important issue to highlight is that the items on the TFR list are NOT incorrect or ungrammatical
sentences.
The idea is that you can use the TFR items to practice revising your own (or someone
else's) writing.
The Rationale area explains why the TFR list is a part of the course, and the other areas provide descriptions and examples of the various items on the Targets for Revising list.
Please come and talk with me if you have any questions or concerns about how to apply the material presented here.