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Simple Sentence Syndrome
With nominalized verbs, the agent, or "doer", is not required in the noun form.

Verb form: Nominalized form:
The student wrote a good essay. The writing in the essay was good.
No instructors required 25 page papers. The requirement for 25 page papers wasn't made.
The union protested the parking fee increases. Parking fee increases led to a protest.