TARGETS FOR REVISING
Rationale
Easy to Spot
Harder to Spot
Simple Sentence Syndrome

While revising, provide the referent rather than an anaphor.

EXAMPLES:

-This means readers have to figure out the referent.
>Using anaphoric elements means readers have to figure out the referent.
 
-Doing that means more processes for the reader to manage.
>Having to figure out the referent means more mental processes for the reader to manage.
 
-These aren't impossible to accomplish, but they can be a distraction.
>The additional mental processes aren't impossible to accomplish, but they can be a distraction.