TARGETS FOR REVISING
Rationale
Easy to Spot
Harder to Spot
Simple Sentence Syndrome

Demonstrative pronouns are anaphoric.
this
 -This means readers have to figure out the referent.
that
 -Doing that means more processes for the reader to manage.
these
 -These aren't impossible to accomplish, but do require more work.
those
 -Those that the writer fills in while revising helps the reader.

Certain quantifiers can be used anaphorically.
some
 -Some aren't too hard to figure out.
many
 -Many are harder for the reader than the writer would think.
few
 -Few would be made worse by the writer filling in the referent.