TARGETS FOR REVISING
Rationale
Easy to Spot
Harder to Spot
Simple Sentence Syndrome
Learning to revise documents is one of the three major thrusts of the course.

However, other than noticing sentences that are just horribly awkward, many students have difficulty identifying what they should revise, especially in their own writing.

Having a Targets for Revising list provides students with a starting point to begin to experiment with revising the sentences they wrote while drafting.

If you take the TFR list seriously and practice revising with the items on the list, you will, in all likelihood, extend your revising practices beyond the types of sentences on the list.

In other words, if you use the TFR as a starting point, you will learn how to manipulate the sentences you write, and you will develop a sensibility about which of your sentences require attention, including sentences that aren't examples of the TFRs.