TARGETS FOR REVISING
Rationale
Easy to Spot
Harder to Spot
Simple Sentence Syndrome

FOR REVISING:

Stop at each pronoun and ask yourself what it refers to. If the nearest potential referent isn't the right one, give the reader the direct reference.

PREVIOUS EXAMPLES REVISED:
After reviewing the team's recommendations,
the committee decided that they needed to do more work.
. . . ,
the committee decided that the team needed to do more work.
. . . ,
the committee decided that the recommendations needed to be more extensive.