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FOR REVISING:
Stop at each pronoun and
ask yourself what it refers to.
If the nearest potential referent isn't the right one,
give the reader the direct reference.
PREVIOUS EXAMPLES REVISED:
After reviewing the team's
recommendations, |
the committee decided that
they
needed to do more work. |
. . . , |
the committee decided
that the team
needed to do more work. |
. . . , |
the committee decided
that the recommendations
needed to be more extensive. |
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